[James Nighthawk]

It's catchy. Lyrically banal and insipid. Unarguably hooky. Falls at every hurdle from a musicological and lyrical dissection. It has 1960's chord changes yet somehow dilutes them; nueters them in fact.

I predict it will be a huge number one Should it fall into the Hands of "One Direction".

Kudos!

[Sing4me88]

Thanks for all the feedback guys. Glad you can see something of worth in it

We are in the process of making a bit of time to re-work this one. Looking at addressing the fact that the pre is catchier than the chorus. We're also toying with the idea of tweaking the lyrics to make it a bubblegum boy band number in light of the feeling from several posters that it works well with male vocals as it is.

Who knows what we'll end up with but I'm sure we'll get plenty of feedback on the completed song