@Kaf Thanks so much for the suggestions, I think that's a great idea, for this one (as usual) I sat at my keyboard and played for a bit then started singing along, I have my DAW set on record so that if I hear anything I like I can go back and modify and expand on it. I then added in some BV's. I usually post songs I have recorded to click, but now we have this great new section, I thought before I spend time doing this I could get some advice from here!
I always seem to 'get' the verse quickly and the chorus is more of a struggle. I know what you mean and you're completely right about the structure and definition I even had the same feedback from an A&R that I need to be more distinctive and adventurous with chords/melody etc. I think if I could come up with a stronger chorus in all of my songs I would be satisified with my writing finally. So I promise myself I'll try writing a different way, for instance start with the chorus first, or just sing away to myself and then fit the chords around that, and then I just fall into the same way of writing again. I don't like change!!! I really need to do this though!
I really value everyone's opinion here and I'm particularly pleased to receive your help, thank you xxx
@Dutchbeat Thanks for the suggestion! Maybe a bit too Rick Astley??!!! Thanks for the compliments as well! xxx