Hey Hab, Loved the feel/atmosphere, lovely melodies. Allans input has certainly made a difference. If anything, I think the vocals could be a bit more 'relaxed'.....I think your forcing it a bit in places, but small stuff.
Very ambitious project you've embarked on here, you're a lot braver than me
All your work is very imaginative, and I'm really enjoying listening to your progress here. Excellent work guys