Hi,
My first post on the WIP section. This song started out over a year ago as something else completely
which I was never happy with. I completely re-wrote it using the same melody and chords with some added sections and I'm still not sure. I want to gauge your opinion about the quality (or not) of the song as obviously it's just me and an acoustic at the moment. Is it worth working up into a full production? I was thinking country/folk with dobro, banjo and some harmonica maybe. Anyhow, thanks for listening.
UPDATE!I played this song to Paul who plays guitar and sings in the band I'm in and he took it away and turned it into this wonderful ragtime feeling version. I had to post to see what you guys and girls think. I reckon he has turned a good track into something pretty special. Paul is singing and playing the acoustic. What do you think? New lyrics are on the Soundcloud page.
https://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/carolina-bound-paul-13-5-13Original version here:
https://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/carolina-boundOne day soon I'll be walking
Heading east, Carolina bound
Seems forever I've been searching
For an echo of that sound
I've been chasing
Instead of facing
The truth in front of me
Clear as a blue day, Carolina bound
There's girl I was courting
From the country side of town
I keep a cloth for when I'm crying
Cut from her wedding gown
Those days are over
My world is colder
She can't comfort me
Can you tell her, I'm Carolina bound
I'm Carolina bound
Shout at the sky
And tell me why
I'm old
The merry go round
Has stopped for good
Now I am stood
Alone
Distant thoughts fill my mind
Like a train whistle blows
Through my brain
Ink on the page I signed
Washed on the winter shore
Clean again
It's been such a long time
Since I was Carolina bound
Fading dreams and a promise
To see the sun coming round
Atlantic daybreak
Keening Kittiwake
I've been too long away
Tomorrow I'm Carolina bound
I'm Carolina bound
Shout at the sky
And tell me why
I'm old
The merry go round
Has stopped for good
Now I am stood
Alone