[terrysains]

I have written  a musical and this is one of the song lyrics, it is written for a character called Para, (he wears a Paratrooper army jacket) but he is really Para...noid...and his partner left him... he is very childish, I would value your opinion... thank you for your time. Terry.





MY HOPES AND DREAMS FOR YOU…


You said it's time to end and I drove you round the bend

and wouldn't it be nice if I would be a distant friend

You said I was a child all I did was drive you wild

and if I say another word a divorce will be filed


Well I hope you love again find a soul mate and a friend

and he pops out for a chinese and you never see him again

I hope you wear a gown for a special night on the town

and as you glide across the floor your knickers start falling down

(chorus)
Well I hope you get constipation and then you get the runs

I hope you wake one morning with immensely sagging buns

I hope your blessed with children then they're taken into care

I hope you get nasty insects dancing in your public hair

(and I don't care, ner, ner,ner,ner, blur,blur,blur)

I hope you date a prince and he wants to make you a queen

and you wake up one fine morning and discover it's just a dream

I hope you meet a man, he's a hero and a fan

and half way through sweet nothings , by mistake he calls you Anne.


I hope you lose your cat also your favourite hat

and your last chance of love turns up and he turns out a rat

I hope your outcomes fine, but then it turns out bleak

a mystery bug that you pick up puts on 10Lbs a week.



well I hope you get deja voux dear and then you don't know why

I hope you get a tune in you head that makes you want to cry

I hope things get so much better for you and then they get really worst

stuck in a lift, on your own, your appendices’ burst.

(and then you're cursed, ner,ner,ner,ner,blur,blur,blur.)



well I hope you get constipation and then you get the runs

I hope you wake one morning with immensely sagging buns

I hope your blessed with children then they're taken into care

I hope you get nasty insects dancing in your public hair

(and I don't care, ner, ner,ner,ner, blur,blur,blur. (fade)

Copyright. May 2011.

TERRY  SAINS.

[Sing4me88]

Ha... love this lyric.I can imagine it working a treat as a musical number... I got a musical Family Guy vibe from this... some belting lines in this one... love the idea of the disease that makes her put on 10lbs in a week

[Jess]

You're writing a musical? That's impressive, and something I'd love to do one day. The first thing that struck me was (obviously my pet hate) the cheesy rhymes, but then, looking at your genre, it really works and I actually quite liked the vocabulary used (so, only this once, I will let the cheesy rhyme thing go I like the humour in this piece, agree very much with sing4me88, although the chorus slightly cringed me out! Like, I can't imagine singing it...maybe it's just me. Anyway, your aim was to write for a musical and I think you've done it really well.