Hey guys,
i just wrote some lyrics and would love to know your opinion about it.
how do you feel when you read it, how do you understand it?
language advice is always welcome.
ps: dont mind the german translation thats just for a german froum
thx in approach
Diamond Heart
can you hear this?
since its coming from afar
since you coming from beyond
--
does your heart beat?
since its brighter than the sun
since youve put it in your chest to shine
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does your mind weep?
when your pump is creaking (out)
and your mouth is trying to shout
--
Chorus:
(you) try all you know to save your diamond heart from breaking down
although it blinks its hard and cold as steel thats draging you down
--
so i told him: hey brother, you should tear this stone out
crush it to thousand pieces and trade them for love
to get back the juice in you veins that nourish your soul
--
no, he said nononono cause
Chorus:
Ill try all i know so save my diamond heart from breaking down
although one day it might be burning my soul and searing my bone
--
bridge
--
one day as i went for a walk
i found a pile of ashes in the yard
and it was glimmering from a thousand diamond shards
