[stephaniedema]

Hey Joe

Just listened to the track (the updated one): great energy!
Only thing I could say is that for me the drums were a little bit too prominent, but on the other hand they do carry the song. And I'm the worst "producer" you've ever heard or seen, so don't bother listening to those remarks too much 
Really liked the track though. Great guitar sound!
Sounds like you've got this one down pretty well.

SD

[The Color of Oldfield]

Song has good potential, agree with some other comments re amount of lyrics per line, sometimes its nice to hang on to fewer syllables, let the music carry the vocals.....

Guessing you're an Oasis fan? Think the guitar solo is a big element of the song...

Looking forward to the next reiteration.....

Regards,

Pete Oldfield
The Color Of Oldfield