Edit:Just an update guys. Here's a fuller version of the song.
https://soundcloud.com/joemcelhone/all-i-wanted-new-demo
Of course it's not finished yet, and there's a few niggly bits, such as flat vocals, a messy guitar solo, and going overboard with my wah-wah pedal. But have a look and see what you think.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------https://soundcloud.com/joemcelhone/all-i-wanted-demoI was playing along with an Oasis song on my guitar, and it got to the solo, and i'm terrible for solos, so I was playing the rhythm, and the chords they were playing underneath the chorus were pretty cool, so I decided to try and see what I could come up with. Paused it, and instantly a melody came in my head.
(Edit: I'll just clarify, that the only chords taken from the song were the B-A-E used in the verses, I'm not evil.)I forgot about the song until I was at a friends where I had stayed over night writing and recording a few of our own songs, I woke up early, and picked up his acoustic, and decided to try and write a second verse, and a kinda chorusy bit that really is more of a bridge.
Because we had all the equiptment set up from the night before, I was able to reel this one off in one take as soon as I finished writing it, so there is a part where I forget the words.
It's probably my most popesque song, and it's quite a vunerable sound, (I'm used to layering vocals behind lots of reverb), but well, here it is.
Get your crackers out, because there's a lot of cheese here.
"All I wanted to do,
Was tell her I love her,
But I know that,
We can never be together.
Now my life's cloudy,
Whatever the weather,
Loneliness ain't too bad,
Unless you live forever.
And it feels like I do.
Now I feel really down,
Even if it's sunny,
They say you can buy lovers,
But I ain't got the money.
All my friends laugh,
They think it's funny,
That there exists a person,
That can be as lonely.
As I am.
A life without you,
Just doesn't bare thinking about,
And I know,
That there ain't no doubt,
That I need to find a way,
To be you're man,
'Cause if I can't have you,
Then no one can."