Thought I'd enter the spirit of the 'new look' forum by posting a first recording of a song I'm writing for my future grandchild......due Sep. so plenty of time
Btw.....excellent idea this WIP section guys. It will be really interesting to see how people develop their songs. Anyway, this song is straight off of the drawing board. My main 'stumbling block' has been the lyrics. I've already had some invaluable help from a few, very generous, members
so I thought I'd 'put it out there' to see if I could get any more ideas from all you clever folk
The harmonies are coming out......I've got other plans for those, and I'll be putting some more slide in, further down the line..... But any and all ideas and thought, most welcome guys....thanks
https://soundcloud.com/binladeda/grandads-song/s-XJwRi The suns going down
but I don't mind the view
My lifes been full
yours is brand new
I own my own problems
Live for the day
don't look to far forward
Its better that way
Sometimes better to be kind than right
Never forget to walk in snow late at night
On lifes long highway, love comes to a few
so dont brush it off, like the dust on your shoe
When I was younger
Thought I was free
Howled at the moon
Kept some bad company
My careless nature led me astray
Till I had lost sight of, what I have today
Love and beauty is better than gold
Try not to believe all the lies that you told
Treasure your friends
Forgive and stay true
Don't brush them off, like the dust on your shoe
Well sometimes, lifes problems
get too big, just for you
I hope you find someone, that you can talk too
cause love will pull through
Just remember, when you're travelling through
Count your friends, not your money
It's the right thing to do
Keeping life simple, was the best thing for me
You can't change the past, but the future is free
Open your heart, give love your best chance
And when you hear music, get up and dance
On lifes long highway, love comes to few
So don't brush it off, like the dust on your shoes