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S.T.C:
`I bow to the greatness of STC,`

I quite like you ,ya know ;D

Greatness,,,hmmm we shall see.

Sing4me88:
I can't disagree with other posters re tweaking the structure a bit but I certainly think most of what is needed is there. The title of this song had me intrigued and I really didn't know what to expect. I liked what I heard as I thought it still held that air of intrigue in that the lyrics don't give too much away and that there is quite a dark feel to the melody.

teprometo13:
I really like this. I think it is good to relate to and the lyrics are amazing.

Good work :D

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