Mrs Perfect

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prideandjoy

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« on: April 14, 2013, 08:01:42 PM »
Don’t destroy this perfect world after all you made it perfect, Mrs Perfect

[Bridge x2]


So you say we are over because it’s my fault

I was the one who had women spilling over me

Begging for me and asking to be with me

I never touched one or even really spoke to one

Oh my woman, listen to me woman

You still have me so come get me

(Chorus)


Never did I flirt with one or attempt to take one

Never has one been in my bed because I want you instead

I don’t tell you how many lust after me

Because you will freak and leave me


Protection from the outside world is why I choose not to tell you

I don’t brag because my love for you is where I still have it bad

You are my world I don’t want to destroy

Yet you are angry and want to destroy

A world so perfect because you are my Mrs Perfect


So you say we are over because it’s my fault

I was the one who had women spilling over me

Begging for me and asking to be with me

I never touched one or even really spoke to one

Oh my woman, listen to me woman

You still have me so come get me

(Chorus)


My woman just try and understand where I am coming from

If you don’t try you won’t see and I’ll be soon gone

Don’t let these small impurities delete me from you

I don’t want to be anywhere but here with you 


Don’t destroy this perfect world after all you made it perfect, Mrs Perfect

[Bridge x2]


When a woman asks me to come home with her, I don’t because I want to come home to you

When a woman wants to get sexual with me, I can only think of you and I know I do still belong with you

Never have I cheated on you when I know I can cheat on you

Never have I slept with many whilst being with you knowing I can sleep with many


Mrs Perfect please listen to me…I can have so many but they are not perfect because my Mrs Perfect already arrived to keep my world perfect


Eh you understand me…Mrs Perfect just smile for me


So you say we are over because it’s my fault

I was the one who had women spilling over me

Begging for me and asking to be with me

I never touched one or even really spoke to one

Oh my woman, listen to me woman

You still have me so come get me

(Chorus)




© NB

3rd June 2012 

prideandjoy

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« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2013, 08:04:19 PM »
Something I wrote last year and its just been sitting there until reading it today...I was writing it to a reggae beat in mind at the time...slow

teprometo13

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« Reply #2 on: April 16, 2013, 10:15:56 AM »
Wow, I really like this song.

You get the message out and it's clear to understand.

Good work :)
Writing songs came as easily as breathing to me

prideandjoy

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« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2013, 08:29:54 PM »
Thanks....it's one of my simple songs compared to more in-depth emotions.
I'm not sure on the flow of it but any changes can be made depending on the music beat

Sing4me88

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« Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 09:22:52 PM »
Some great lines in this one, great title too... I was expecting a Pop love song but I've been pleasantly surprised. Have you got a genre in mind. This one could work quite well as an RnB track or singer songwriter acoustic style like Ed Sheeran, Poalo Nutini etc. Some great lyrics especially the freaking out line in the chorus.

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« Reply #5 on: April 16, 2013, 11:04:12 PM »
Hey thanks for the positive comments, wasn't sure how this one would be seen. Beleive it or not I had reggae in my mind when writing this one.....just slow; I think the words mixed with a steady beat would just do the trick

Sing4me88

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« Reply #6 on: April 16, 2013, 11:06:22 PM »
Reggae could certainly work.... I got a Paolo Nutini type vibe of this and some of his stuff isn't a million mile away from Reggae. A good steady beat will be the making of this. Can't wait to here it :)