[man of simple pleasures]

cheers tone! yeah i'm more the stones than the who! yeah i like the acoustic over the electric guitar sound! well i'm gona try and produce something decent for this tune!

[James Nighthawk]

I'd take this along as a The Who meets The Killers. Bass drum, tamb, heavy stummed acoutsics, leaving the electrics for licks only. Then wided the vocal field with lots of double tracking and layers. This could indeed go lots of places. I would want a third section, somethign melodic where the vocal takes precedence and the guitars play simple strums, to contrast the stop start of the guitars in the sections you have. JNx

[man of simple pleasures]

ah nice one james for listening! yeah all interesting stuff you said there mate, certainly be taking things on board what you say and working on this somewhere down the line, maybes when that blues comp kicks in altho the stones and the who i can probably only dream of getting it to sound somewhere as good as those giants haha