[Missseventeen]

So this is a really raw song for me with all my truth and emotion basically on this page!
sorry if it sounds abit of a rant? any and all feedback is really appropriated thankyou!

 Sick of the cards
The flowers and fake smiles
The cards that line my bedside
It's easier to say get well soon
Then to be inside my mind

The constant questions
How's your mood
Have you eaten
What was your sleep like
Maybe if you cared
I'd answer and give a damn

I'm done with your fake sympathy
Telling me everything will be okay
Unless your a mind reader
don't give me a false reminder

I'm stuck in these 4 walls
I try act better then I open my mouth
24 lock down
no visitors until you swallow your food
I promise ill be good
I promise ill be good

Doors slamming
Tears falling
Screams at night
Hall roaming
So you think you know how this feels
Please you haven't even tried

Take one night in this bed
One day locked up in my mind
Try ease the pain I've gained
I dare you to say yeah please

I'm done with your fake sympathy
Telling me everything will be okay
Unless your a mind reader
don't give me a false reminder

I'm stuck in these 4 walls
I try act better then I open my mouth
24 lock down
no visitors until you swallow your food
I promise ill be good
I promise ill be good

But maybe one day ill be able to be alone
Get over these fears and move on
I'm gonna try but I can't leave this life behind
Wherever I go it goes too
Just wanna forget, wanna be numb,
don't wanna be pretend I'm good

I'm done with your fake sympathy
Telling me everything will be okay
Unless your a mind reader
don't give me a false reminder

I'm stuck in these 4 walls
I try act better then I open my mouth
24 lock down
no visitors until you swallow your food
I promise ill be good
I promise ill be good

I need to be good

[teprometo13]

Wow! I can relate to this song - good work.

In love with:

I'm done with your fake sympathy
Telling me everything will be okay
Unless your a mind reader
don't give me a false reminder

That is really good.

I like the way you used:slamming, falling and roaming, but maybe use a rhyme?

good work

[k8he]

Omg!! *-*
Cant explain <3
loooove these lyrics.
They are so honest.
Keep writing :*