Hi guys,
I'e got the rough outline for a song on a skeleton arrangement here, it's a bit plodding right now and not finished yet. The song drifts from the second verse, so I'm going to work on sorting the structure and arrangement next couple of weeks. My chord progressions are stuck in real rut and I always lose direction after the second verse. Not very good from that point on. It's hard when you get stuck on a section though.
Anyway, I'm keen to hear your feedback as always, before the song is set in stone.
https://soundcloud.com/michelleapatrick/under-a-train-work-in-progressUnder A Train I fell under a train, on St Swithin's Day.
I was heading out of town, almost on my way.
We waited impatiently, in a familiar place.
I saw the train arrive, when someone stepped into my space.
I heard the people cry, no I never could walk a straight line.
A grace came over me, I knew it was my time.
I could feel I was crossing over, it was a beautiful free fall.
As I walked that Holy trail, I knew I wasn't leaving you.
From behind that Holy veil, I knew I wasn't leaving you.
I could feel I was crossing over, it was a beautiful free fall.
I could feel I was crossing over,
I could feel I was crossing over.
By the way, I'm not the singer. The amazing vocals on all my demos are courtesy of Andy Wilshire. He is available for session work in the South East/London - is really reasonable and always lifts the track. If you're looking for a session singer, contact Andy on.
enquiries@andywilshersings.co.uk
Also, if you are looking for a songwriter demo, reasonable rates for studio hire, the lovely guy who normally does my demos can be contacted via Andy (they'll work a demo for you), or you can contact Lloyd directly for studio time/using your own vocals.
lloyd scott <lloydbentleyscott@hotmail.co.uk>