What have I become?

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Sing4me88

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« on: April 06, 2013, 01:13:09 PM »
Another darker Pop type number about self doubt, self loathing and insecurity.

Constructive feedback as always welcome :)

What have I become  ©Hearty 2013

V1
It’s not what I am that scares me,
I’m frightened of what I’ll never be,
Cos I know the person that I was,
 I know where I have come from,
Now I’m wasting my days staring,
At some strange guy in the mirror,
So tell me what have I become,
Oh oh oh what have I become

PC
Whoah why won’t you look at me,
Whoah why won’t you talk to me,
Whoah please just answer me

C
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m what I hate the most

V2
Woke up hating myself today,
Just a little more than the day before,
I swear it’s slowly wearing me away,
Myself and I caught in a waging war,
Hell bent for a fight to the death,
So we’ll fight now to the death,
Oh, oh, this is what I’ve become

PC
Whoah I don’t wanna look at me,
Whoah I don’t wanna talk to me,
Whoah can’t even answer me

C
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m what I hate the most

B
I’ve got a grip on me,
Feel myself strangling me,
I’m pulling myself down, down, down

I’m slowly killing me,
Think I’m too good for me,
I’m bringing myself down, down, down

C
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m becoming what I hate the most,
No, no, no,
I’m what I hate the most

« Last Edit: April 20, 2013, 12:29:40 PM by Sing4me88 »

Missseventeen

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« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2013, 03:48:43 PM »
Really enjoyed reading these lyrics, second verse is my favourite - the lyrics seem deep and meanigful!
Keep up the good work
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« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2013, 06:02:08 PM »
This was good. I liked the theme about it most I think. For me it picked up a bit at the second verse and I got more into it from there. Seems quite catchy though. Would like to hear it.
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