Got these two verses for a song, but struggling with any chorus and melody. Any ideas of where I could take it? It's about alienation in society, and within a relationship. being lost and so on.
Verse
The sound of the town
is drowning out our song.
Can you feel your way along,
this concrete Babylon?
As ghosts walk by
in search of the life they were promised.
I am dust,
with nothing to settle upon.
Chorus
Verse
Out side the seasons come and go,
they chase the colours of the sun.
I won't stay here, I won't remain here
where you left me free falling.
Like leaves on the ground,
waiting for your steps upon me.
I am dust, and you can't set me down.
Chorus
Bridge/Mid 8
Caught up in a whirlwind that's taking me,
taking me to places I can't write postcards from.