[gambleranonymous]

Just had an idea and went with it. Kinda scared myself wondering where it came from
I had no tune in mind, just wanted it to flow.
Oh well its good practice. Its about those that want to be worshiped instead of worshiping.
Is it easy to follow?

Verse

keep on talking that talk
In vein, walk that walk
All your gold, all your silver
In the end none of it
is of use to him

chorus

Its inevitable whats to come
keep on using that forked tongue
because
one side for Brutus
two for Judas
the third for the forked
and the useless

verse

tell me you here the trumpets blare
but im no sheep, i dont care
youre easy to see through
just keep relying on
the confidence of youth

chorus

its inevitable whats to come
keep on using that forked tongue
because
one side for Brutus
two for Judas
the third for the forked
and the useless

verse

when its cold you will know
where youre going
is covered in ice, and in snow
its a lake you see
at the end a beast
head is times three

Bridge

its inevitable and now times come
you just refused to stop your forked tongue

[Lyrycalsoulz]

what is this song about? hahaha sowwi

I liked the sentance that was about the trumpet and then u said i aint no sheep so i dont care haha that was good i liked that a lot haha

The flow around the forked tongue got me a little lost tho I must admit haha

Nice wordy lil set of lyrics you have here though I can´t lie

I would jst rethink a few things though as really how you expressed what you want to say had me confused and still unsure as to what the song is about haha

[gambleranonymous]

I like the feedback. Im thinking bout trashing most of the verses as I too, am unsure of the where and why. I know what I wanted it to be about but did a poor job of telling  a story. Thank you

[Jess]

Do not trash any of this! It's all really good just not in the same song- every part has a different message so I think you should keep all the sections to create new songs with different messages. Although, I got a little lost in this one, you can't deny you have an amazing way with words! Can't wait to read more of your stuff

[darreldo]

Do not throw any of this away, you can always recycle the parts you decide to chop up and take out.
It seems like you have abit of a confidence issue regarding this post but they are good lyrics mate, you could do lots with this song, keep at it pal

[Sing4me88]

I concur with other posters re not throwing away any lyrics. The chorus is really strong and I love the Judas - useless rhyme. All that it takes is a slight tweak here or there in the verses, mostly the latter verses as the 1st verse is spot on IMO, for you to have something of worth to progress with

[gambleranonymous]

Looks like we're on the same page. Most of this has been chopped up and put into different set of lyrics. I really enjoy the feedback