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BooBoo

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« on: March 23, 2013, 03:44:30 PM »
Hey, this song is about music acts that seem to irritate me for some reason. Just tell me what you think :)

Mirrors

Verse
You have a smile on your face,
When you wake up everyday,
Because you know in reality,
You don't have to go out of your way,
Your whole world is handed you,
On a silver platter,
And when your name is in the press,
It doesn't matter

Pre chorus
Thousands will always be screaming your name,
And going along with all your mind games,

Chorus
Make sure there's no imperfections,
In your perfect life,
Make sure you're rocking out,
To lyrics you didn't write,
If you look in the mirror,
And don't like what you see,
Well tough,
You wanted to be a celebrity,
So keep that smile,
On your face,
Because you need thousands of girls,
Screaming your name 

Verse
All they care about,
Is about how you look in the mirror,
Not music with any meaning,
Just looks and nothing deeper,
So get back to your reflection,
And comb your hair,
Because if it isn't perfect,
They won't care,

Pre chorus
Thousands will always be screaming your name,
And going along with all your mind games,

Chorus
Make sure there's no imperfections,
In your perfect life,
Make sure you're rocking out,
To lyrics you didn't write,
If you look in the mirror,
And don't like what you see,
Well tough,
You wanted to be a celebrity,
So keep that smile,
On your face,
Because you need thousands of girls,
Screaming your name 

Bridge
You look into the mirror,
And see a different world,
Where everything is normal and calm,
But this way,
You have no money, have no girls,
So you turn away and put back on the charm

Chorus
Make sure there's no imperfections,
In your perfect life,
Make sure you're rocking out,
To lyrics you didn't write,
If you look in the mirror,
And don't like what you see,
Well tough,
You wanted to be a celebrity,
So keep that smile,
On your face,
Because you need thousands of girls,
Screaming your name 
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Sing4me88

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« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 05:34:30 PM »
I really like this one Boo. Its a great parody of the modern celebrity culture with a great sting in the tail. Got that Lily Allen vibe from it. I love the line about them rocking out to lyrics they didn't write. The chorus delivers a great punch and the thrust of the message is made quite clear. The bridge is really strong and I think it very cleverly delivers a serious message dressed up in sardonic clothing. A great lyric by all accounts :)

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« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2013, 03:46:35 PM »


You can see clearly the message of the lyrics which is really good,hate to repeat stuff but the chorus does really hit you and you manage to connect it all, with a good structure, Great work :P.

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« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 04:18:58 PM »
Love this!! Really strong chorus, great rhymes and honest message, especially love the line in the chorus about lyrics they didn't write and in the verse looks and nothing deeper, this is one of your best songs so far x
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« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2013, 06:28:29 PM »
Thanks guys, I'm gla you seemed to like it. Seems like you all like the chorus :p
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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2013, 02:48:02 PM »
the reason i am a fan of this song is because literally is it so much truth!!! some things you expressed in a way I would have chose other words and expressions but of course we all have our own take on things but wow great job! i actually smiled at one point like this song i hpoe gets sung on radio one day because its gr8 ...

any melody or music or vocals to go with it?

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« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2013, 03:27:29 PM »
Ooh I would love to know which part of the song you smiled at ;) I'm just happy people are liking the song!

Unfortunately I don't have anything music wise to it. :(
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« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2013, 12:07:01 PM »
I enjoyed this a great deal. What genre do you have in mind?


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« Reply #8 on: April 03, 2013, 05:31:16 PM »
Glad you did. As for genre I'm not to sure but probably more pop. If anyone has any ideas on that and would be able to put music to it  please PM me xx
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« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2013, 10:53:14 PM »
Really impressed with the lyrics. Every single line is as strong as the other and there are too many memorable lines to quote. Brilliant piece of work.

You got a melody/production in mind? 

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« Reply #10 on: April 10, 2013, 01:03:38 PM »
Thank you. It's nice that you think each line is a strong as the other.

As for melody and production I have ideas but I can't do anything myself as I can't play anything or do anything like that. If anyone wants to help please PM me
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