Dirty Dancefloor

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« on: November 20, 2010, 05:35:49 PM »
Hi Guys

This song has actually been picked up by Scottish producer Jan Cree
And will hopefully be released via bulletdodge records

I'm glad but I'm not the vocalist just the songwriter but i remain fully commited to my Punk roots and will continue to write my own stuff :)

anyways have a look

Dirty Dancefloor

Welcome to the streets, Welcome to the life
It ain't very pretty, I ain't gonna lie
I seen my woman with another man
I ain't gonna run, No I ain't gonna hide
Just gonna laugh cause I don't wanna cry

I was really happy around 3 hours ago
Now that you've decided to change your mind
I'm just picking up the shards of a heart of stone
Lady watch you don't slip on your high heel
Because my souls leaking out onto this dirty dance floor

I raised my head and straightened my smile
I dusted off the pain and gave it a style
Don't wanna see you at all tonight
Just let me dance in my own world
Somewhere under the neon sunlight

I was really happy around 3 hours ago
Now that you've decided to change your mind
I'm just picking up the shards of a heart of stone
Lady watch you don't slip on your high heel
Because my souls leaking out onto this dirty dance floor

Turns out you were a beautiful thief who
was only gonna steal my heart
now that your standing on the horizon
can you see me trying to make up my mind
Wether I was in love or just plain dumb

I was really happy around 3 hours ago
Now that you've decided to change your mind
I'm just picking up the shards of a heart of stone
Lady watch you don't slip on your high heel
Because my souls leaking out onto this dirty dance floor


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« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2010, 01:38:43 PM »
That is good writing

i very much like lines like

 "I was really happy 3 hours ago"

and "I raised my head and straigthened my smile"