Only a fool would mind

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Tony h Lfc

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« on: February 20, 2013, 06:51:02 PM »

(V1)
Your my reason for livin'
You make me feel i can't loose
Your the pulse in my system darlin'
Your the beat within my groove

(Chorus1)
Oh baby when im not with you
I feel like im all dead inside
Oh baby all i need from you
Is when I wake up in the morning
Your by my side

(V2)
All my life
Ive dreamt of lady's like you
I've had many wet dreams at night
Now when im home
At its quietest time
Ther is no need
To throw myself around the room

(Chorus2)
Oh baby whim not with you
Im climbing up the walls
Screaming and crying
Oh honey all i need from you
Is when I wake up in the morning
Your by my side

(Mid 8)
I go to work To earn all i can
Then spend it all in one night
On the thing I love the most
The one thing baby
That gets me high

As always all comments good or bad welcome

Sing4me88

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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2013, 02:27:01 PM »
This has a nice feel to it and it flows well. I really like the opening verse and think its very strong esp the 'beat in my groove' bit, great writing there :)

Tony h Lfc

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« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2013, 03:41:16 PM »
Thanks for the kind words (sing4me) im gonna stick it down as a track soon just waiting for my laptop to be fixed mite do a really rough one on my ipad or phone just so people can hear it in its bare bones again thanks for your time