What do you guys think of my lyrics? Any improvements and suggestions would be appreciated.
Title: Too Cliché
Key: B
Verse 1) Monday comes and I’m back home from the weekend
Friday night never looked so far
Chewing cum and I’m passed out from the weekend
I don’t want to get up
Pre Chorus) Stuck in the same routine day after day that’s what they say
I’m going to be a loner no one else to drop in on me
Maybe I’ve my standards way too f*****g high
It’s noon and I’m not dressed I wonder why
Chorus) So hats off to everyone who’s trying to make a difference
I’d love to be like you but now one would understand it’s true
I’d like to live my life a different way
But that’s just getting too cliché
Verse 2) I moved to Cali just to start a new rock band
But no one wants to hear these songs
I wait on tables through the night just for income
Why is life so f*****g hard?
Pre Chorus) Stuck in the same routine day after day that’s what they say
I’m going to be a loner no one else to drop in on me
Maybe I’ve my standards too f*****g high
It’s noon and I’m not dressed I wonder why
Chorus) So hats off to everyone who’s trying to make a difference
I’d love to be like you but now one would understand it’s true
I’d like to live my life a different way
But that’s just getting too cliché
Bridge) I’ve got to sort my life out
I’ve got to live my life now
I don’t know if I’ll make it
But I got to try
Pre Chorus) Stuck in the same routine day after day that’s what they say
I’m going to be a loner no one else to drop in on me
Maybe I’ve my standards too f*****g high
It’s noon and I’m not dressed I wonder why
Chorus) So hats off to everyone who’s trying to make a difference
I’d love to be like you but now one would understand it’s true
I’d like to live my life a different way
But that’s just getting too cliché
That’s just getting too cliché
This song is way too cliché
