I just want to know what you guys think of my lyrics? Any improvements or suggestions would be appreciated?
Title: Eternal Madness
Key: C
Verse 1) I don’t know, I don’t care
All of the love we share
It’s all I really need
To make me feel complete
Verse 2) Flowing hair in the breeze
Sailing across the seas
From a far away land
The city of the dammed
Chorus) People all around
You’re no where to be found
Your love’s what I need
To get me through this day
My heart is calling out
To you there’s no doubt
That give my love to you
Is all I want to do
Verse 3) Starlight night, blinding eyes
Twinkling through the skies
One of them must be you
My heart is calling through
Chorus) People all around
You’re no where to be found
Your love’s what I need
To get me through this day
My heart is calling out
To you there’s no doubt
That give my love to you
Is all I want to do
Bridge) I’ll be all right, you by my side
I’ll be all right
You by my side, I’ll stay alive
You by my side tonight
Solo
Chorus) People all around
You’re no where to be found
Your love’s what I need
To get me through this day
My heart is calling out
To you there’s no doubt
That give my love to you
Is all I want to do
