Practice What You Preach

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« on: February 15, 2013, 10:46:00 PM »
I just want to know what you guys think of my lyrics? Any improvements or suggestions would be appreciated?


Title: Practice What You Preach
Key: A

Verse 1) You’re too right to be too wrong
You’re too weak to be too strong
Why can’t you learn to practice watch you preach?
Before you start lecturing me

Verse 2) Your mouth is clearly filled with s**t
I can’t keep on taking it
Why can’t you learn to practice watch you preach?
Before you start lecturing me

Chorus) I dug myself, into a hole of bitter health
With dirty secrets and a lack of wealth
Where demons hide, oh the answers I might find
With all the dirtiest of man kind

Verse 3) I’m stuck in the middle of this argument
Where nothing at all makes any sense
Why can’t you learn to practice watch you preach?
Before you start lecturing me

Chorus) I dug myself, into a hole of bitter health
With dirty secrets and a lack of wealth
Where demons hide, oh the answers I might find
With all the dirtiest of man kind

Solo

Chorus) I dug myself, into a hole of bitter health
With dirty secrets and a lack of wealth
Where demons hide, oh the answers I might find
With all the dirtiest of man kind

Chorus) I dug myself, into a hole of bitter health
With dirty secrets and a lack of wealth
Where demons hide, oh the answers I might find
With all the dirtiest of man kind

With all the dirtiest of man kind
With all the dirtiest of man kind

paulmclay

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« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 10:08:42 AM »

Hey Lukenp, this is a very nice little tune. I've not heard this topic covered too mant times and I think this is one of the finest chorus' Ive read on this forum.
Good work man
Paul S. McLay