[Dead Weight]

Hello again all,

Feedback, as always, is appreciated.


Two Cars Crashing

1.
Late night
Home-bound
Driving
Too fast
I can’t remember if I was drinking or swimming
Either way, I can’t remember a damn thing

Sit there
Silence
One more word from you and you can get out and walk

Pre-chorus
Red light
Tyres slide
Too late
Car crash!

Chorus
You’ll never feel the same again
I wish you could not feel the pain
Of love...

2.
Screens smash
Block cracks
Deploys
Airbag
The air rushes through you like some kind of spirit
Asking you do you have your heart in it

Glass flies
Cuts eyes
Hope for shock before you have to feel the pain

Pre-chorus
See night
Then ground
Car crash
Rebound

Chorus
You’ll never feel the same again,
I wish you could not feel the pain,
You’ll never feel so alive...

Instrumental

Final Chorus
You’ll never feel the same again
I wish you could not feel the pain
You’ll never feel so alive
There’s no more chance for us

For love...

[S.T.C]

Interesting...i think they will make a good little rock song.

[BooBoo]

I wasn't too keen on the first verse, I didn't think that flowed so well but from the chorus onwards I thought it for better and I enjoyed it more. Maybe hearing it I might hear the flow of the first verse. XX