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Sing4me88

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« on: February 06, 2013, 11:15:12 AM »
An old one I came across recently and decided to re-jig and tweak to make it more commercially amenable. A Pop type lyric where the chorus tells what the guy can't do, the pre-chorus tells what he can and the chorus asks the girl what she wants from him, the bridge is an impassioned plea to simply love him for who/what he is

All feedback welcome :)

Only a man:  ©Hearty 2013
V1
Baby I can’t walk on water,
Or turn it into wine,
I can’t control the weather,
Or turn back time

Pre-chorus
But I can love you girl,
Like never before,
Make you my world,
Yeah of that I’m sure,
Of that I’m sure

Chorus
So tell me what you want,
Tell me what you want,
 I’ll give it best I can,
Oh baby if I can

What you want from me,
What you want from me,
‘Cos baby I’m only a man,
I’m only a man

V2
Baby I don’t own big wheels,
Or have the Midas touch,
Baby I’m no big deal,
I really don’t impress that much

Pre-chorus
But you need to know,
I’m crazy about you,
And I can love you so,
Much baby like you never knew,
Like you never knew

Chorus
So tell me what you want,
Tell me what you want,
I’ll give it best I can,
Oh baby if I can

What you want from me,
What you want from me,
‘Cos baby I’m only a man,
I’m only a man

Bridge
I’ve got flaws and I’m not perfect,
I’m hard work baby I’m worth it,
Swear you won’t get better love
Baby it’s not a lot but maybe it’s enough,
Chorus
So tell me what you want,
Tell me what you want,
I’ll give it best I can,
Oh baby if I can

What you want from me,
What you want from me,
‘Cos baby I’m only a man,
I’m only a man

Outro
Not a God, not a demon,
Not a beast I’m only a man
« Last Edit: April 20, 2013, 12:35:59 PM by Sing4me88 »

BooBoo

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« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 06:17:24 PM »
I think this has to be one of my favorites so far. I just really love everything about this song. It's weird because you said it was like a pop song but I could imagine it being something slightly country as well but that might just be because I have been listening to some country haha. Another good wrote, keep it up!
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« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 07:42:48 PM »
Thank for the feedback Boo, glad you like it :) I've never really thought of it as a country type lyric until you mentioned it but it does have that kinda feel to it know you've brought it up! I kinda wrote it originally as a Pop type for the Olly Murs type male artist but I guess it could work quite well as a country song either. I'm glad you've opened up another perspective on it and stopped me pigeon holing it as another Pop song! I have a Pop style melody in my head for it but hey that could very easily change.I guess it will all hinge on which ever producer/composer I can get to collaborate with me and turn it into a song ;)