This is my first post on this site so please be gentle with me. I've tried to spell and do the grammar right but do have issues with this sometimes. I'm not sure if it's quite finished yet and the tittle needs some work, the red sections are the chorus.
I normally right when I have a lot of emotions.
Oh god please
Maybe someone out their can help and explain.
Because from where I’m standing anything I do is just in vain.
I just don’t understand what I do wrong.
It just feels like where ever I go I don’t belong.
Other people seem to walk through life.
No matter what they do, it always turns out right.
Why do people not see the things they do.
Instead they get encouraged as if there someone to look upto.
Oh god, please forgive me for not believing in you.
But in my hour of need it’s you I turn too.
Why do you burden me with so much pain?
Oh please god can’t you tell me how to take it away.
All I need from someone is some sort of sign.
Someone to tell me it's not a waste of my time.
If my future in this world, is never to be happy.
Then maybe now’s the time to leave this place that makes me so angry.
It sounds so selfish all the heart ache, I’ll leave behind.
But is wanting happiness & freedom such a big crime.
If it will not come to me in this life of mine.
Then maybe I've come to the end of the line.
Oh god, please forgive me for not believing in you.
But in my hour of need it’s you I turn too.
Why do you burden me with so much pain?
Oh please god can’t you tell me how to take it away.
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