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Let's write a song, each add a line.

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habiTat

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« on: December 17, 2012, 05:29:48 PM »
Three verses, each of four lines, a chorus (4 lines) and a bridge (4 lines). With each post, add your own line, follow the structure below.  Let's see what we get  :D :D

Verse
verse
ch
Verse
Bridge
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« Reply #1 on: December 17, 2012, 06:56:30 PM »
Ok here goes, first line....



Out of the misty dawn



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« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2012, 11:02:19 PM »
Came Ethel with her tea
There are holes in the sky where the rain gets in  , but they're ever so small, that's why rain is thin.

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« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2012, 11:17:05 PM »
she wished she'd mown the lawn
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« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2012, 11:41:38 PM »
she thought, as Fred's hand crept up her knee

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« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2012, 09:21:00 AM »
Hehe.. :D

verse 2...

She braved the next few minutes
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« Reply #6 on: December 18, 2012, 03:18:15 PM »
Closed her eyes and said
There are holes in the sky where the rain gets in  , but they're ever so small, that's why rain is thin.

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« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2012, 03:33:11 PM »
I hope Fred knows his limits


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« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2012, 05:16:17 PM »
and now he's buried in the shed
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« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2012, 09:04:00 PM »
  oowah oowah boom boom ditty
buried in a shed
aint that a pity         
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Nowt as queer as folk...........my gran

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« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2012, 09:06:36 AM »
Ok, so far we have poor old Fred, just trying to gain affection from Ethel. He pushes his luck and gets brutally murdered by Ethel who proceeds to dig a shallow grave in the shed and bury his body..

the power of collective thought eh.. :D

Out of the misty dawn
Came Ethel with her tea
she wished she'd mown the lawn
she thought, as Fred's hand crept up her knee

She braved the next few minutes
Closed her eyes and said
I hope Fred knows his limits
and now he's buried in the shed

oowah oowah boom boom ditty
buried in a shed
aint that a pity 
   

We need a last line for the chorus, then another verse and finally a bridge.

Once it's written I'll compose something and record it, or someone else can, it's not my usual style  :D

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« Reply #11 on: December 19, 2012, 09:11:50 AM »
It's shaping up!! How about repeating Bin's bit but with a different bit at the end! Like this but with words instead of Blah's!

oowah oowah boom boom ditty
buried in a shed
aint that a pity 

oowah oowah boom boom ditty
blah blah blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah!


You know what rhymes with ditty.....! ;D ::)

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« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2012, 10:15:29 AM »
Kitty?

Pity?
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« Reply #13 on: December 19, 2012, 10:27:29 AM »
LOL,

to keep is clean..ish....


oohwa oohwa boom boom ditty
under the shed
next to the kitty
« Last Edit: December 19, 2012, 10:30:34 AM by habiTat »

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« Reply #14 on: December 19, 2012, 02:05:55 PM »
or perhaps


beneath the shovels and hoes, nobody knows
whats buried in the shed



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