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Raven and the Rose

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Florida Mike

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« Reply #15 on: December 16, 2012, 04:20:48 AM »
Stratos, you are famous in my eyes as you are a songwriter, and that's enough for me to respect! Whatever "Avatar" you choose is meaningless to me, just what you are is  cool enough and kind enough to serve up... cheers. MH

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« Reply #16 on: December 16, 2012, 11:56:20 AM »
Ermm yes didnt mean to appear rude. I just don't really know what to say that's why I usually stay silent and just listen to people's ideas. :  )

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I am not famous and the reason for the avatar is that it was one of the default ones on the profile so I expect many more to have it as well. :  )


no & i didnt mean to be rude either but i think if people  are good enuff to listen & leave feedback its good to acknoledge them & repond dont you think  :)

i had no idea that avatatr was there to choose when you joined things must have changed since i came here!
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« Reply #17 on: December 16, 2012, 12:48:04 PM »
very nice vocal

and a good song, but perhaps you could add a sort of suprise, a change in vocal melody at some point...?? perhaps...

but great work!!!!!!

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« Reply #18 on: December 16, 2012, 02:42:18 PM »
This is high caliber man, really touching vocals and your voice reminds me of radio head a bit, the mix is good, you seem to introduce the drums at exactly the right time and the distorted guitar too.
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« Reply #19 on: December 16, 2012, 05:30:36 PM »
Yes....I like ;D ;D  I agree with Jim, this is special.  Original, captivating stuff....don't think I've ever heard anything quite like it. You have a great voice....the song had style,  and I just loved the mood/atmosphere of the whole piece.....Great work
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« Reply #20 on: December 17, 2012, 07:59:37 PM »
very dark stuff this like! good stuff tho!
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« Reply #21 on: December 18, 2012, 07:40:31 PM »
Good guitar sound and good voice.
You could take drums in one verse earlier. Maybe 5 minutes long song needs one more part.

All in all I enjoyed this song.