[SoundOnTape]

Hi..This is my first song in English..I ve just recorded it and i wanted to share it with you..I hope somebody will like it haha..

[S.T.C]

Bravo..very imaginative piece of music..melodic yet simple...great atmosphere.
Led zeplinish in places..guitar and vocals..interesting song..

[Sunfighter]

Bravo..very imaginative piece of music..melodic yet simple...great atmosphere.
Led zeplinish in places..guitar and vocals..interesting song..

I'd echo those comments, I really like this.  It's very atmospheric and the guitar sounds nice.

Personally, I wish there was more variation in the vocals - perhaps a bit more structure to the song?

And I'd probably bring the vocals in a bit sooner.

But very nice, I really enoyed it

[ABeautifulVirus]

really nice portrait here- endearing and lofty

some Thom Yorke in your vox in places which is nice

guitar echoes shades of Lindsey Buckingham and Jimmy Page. awesome tone. verb fx give a nice room vibe

think there is a lot of room for more sonic development too imo - melodic exploration, instrumentation/rhythm elements etc...

kewl --

-Daren

[SoundOnTape]

Hi..I am really happy that you liked it..I wanted to write something stark so yes it s a bit simple in some ways..

[RichyRowlatt]

Lovely guitar, I enjoyed it very much. I agree that the box could've come in sooner but I was enjoying the intro very much regardless,

Top stuff,

Richy

[Neil C]

Lovely atmospheric and soundscape - very delicate. I agree with songsthatcry about structure. I cant imagine how hard it must be to sing in a non-native language!
 
Neil 

[Schavuitje]

This is one of the most enchanting pieces I've heard for a while.
The guitar was beautiful.
The vocals could be better, a little more confidence, but I realise you are not singing in your native language. What is your native tongue?
Very nice piece of music

[montydog]

The guitar part is wonderful but there is not enough else, I'm afraid. I didn't get any of the lyrics and it needs more variation in melody and arrangement. Great potential from the quality of your playing and voice.

[SoundOnTape]

This is one of the most enchanting pieces I've heard for a while.
The guitar was beautiful.
The vocals could be better, a little more confidence, but I realise you are not singing in your native language. What is your native tongue?
Very nice piece of music

Thank you My native tongue is Turkish..

[jim morrison]

What a fantastic piece of playing , I'm going to listen to this properly later - love it

[andy5544]

I liked it haha 

great playing .

[digger72]

Hi,

Lovely guitar work. Very nice atmosphere you've built up. I liked the vocal, but again would have liked a little more variation in the delivery. Perhaps another guitar part or another melody just to break things up would be good.

Digger