[Reece!]

just a song about having fun and drinking
(its kind of rubbish but...)

MY HEART BELONGS TO THE NIGHT!

i just wonna have a good time
while i still can
this ain't another love story
its just about having a good time
while the night is still ours
we'll stop when we see no stars
come on lets tear up the night
come on lets do it just right
cos i just wonna have fun
lets party until we see the sun

(chorus)
my heart belongs to the night
my heart belongs to the night
ain't got love in my sight
im just looking forward to the night
i think im hanging on to tight
Staying out till we see sun light
yeah, my heart is thumping
my heart belongs to the night
here comes the weekend
here comes the weekend
now we dont have to pretend
that my heart belongs to the night

pour me a glass of mine
dont take forever, dont waste my time
we hear the clock go tick tock
looking forward to the party time
its just fun, so dont cross the line
come on lets tear up the night
come on lets do it just right
cos i just wonna have fun
lets party until we see the sun

(chorus)
my heart belongs to the night
my heart belongs to the night
ain't got love in my sight
im just looking forward to the night
i think im hanging on to tight
Staying out till we see sun light
yeah, my heart is thumping
my heart belongs to the night
here comes the weekend
here comes the weekend
now we dont have to pretend
that my heart belongs to the night

give me another drink
i ain't got time to think
dont waste my time
why commit a crime (why?)
we all just wonna have fun
before the night is done

(chorus)
my heart belongs to the night
my heart belongs to the night
ain't got love in my sight
im just looking forward to the night
i think im hanging on to tight
Staying out till we see sun light
yeah, my heart is thumping
my heart belongs to the night
here comes the weekend
here comes the weekend
now we dont have to pretend
that my heart belongs to the night

[S.T.C]

OK...
It`s very light,,substance wise..i think you know that....

My first impression is the chorus is to long and with it being repeated 3 times , over whelms the  3 verses,,

You need to re structure this, make a shorter chorus..and separate your bridges from the verses..

[Reece!]

yeah, i totally agree
thanks for your helpful comments 

is you dont mind could you comment on my other song named

'GET OUT' would mean a lot

[BooBoo]

I prefer the verses over the chorus to be honest. I personally thing the chorus could be shorter but in the end it is your song and up to you what feels right.

[Reece!]

thanks (BooBoo)

i was thinking that and i left it for a while and then i just made it longer, but thanks

[BooBoo]

Well whatever you feel is right to me is the most important thing. Listen to advice though.

[The Corsair]

Starting to flood the forum a bit there Reece. Good stuff, and I'll review properly later, but for now just try and limit yourself. I'm not sure off the top of my head what the rule is, but I think it's something like a song a week.

Keep up the writing though