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lightspeed182

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« on: July 08, 2009, 06:03:02 PM »
ive been writing stuff for 6/7 years. im not much of a performer, more of a writer. im not too bad on guitar i spose but dont like singing. Im very chuffed that you liked the lyrics. thanks very much.  steve


rights for your mind.   steve sims 2009



e                                                                         
  do you like the way  you think the place where you work the flat screen tv
                           b                                                                      e
  the pain that dont hurt the ball and the chain thats wrapped round your brain
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  do you want to be dead on your feet eyes open wide seeing nothing trying to hide
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  from the reality from the void thats inside

              cshpm                                             e
  can you ever see outside the game youre not to blame
              cshpm                                     e                             b
  can you feel the acid in the rain oh what a shame but your not to blame
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  so swith on the box see all the people smiling in vain
  b                                                        e                                  b
  turn on the tube youve nothing to lose but nothing to gain oh what a shame

e                                     
  do you wannna dig your own grave to be fearless and brave
                                                   b                     
  to be under the wave and under the ground you wont here a sound
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  who cares anyway
                                           
  would you like to shout it out load be part of the crowd
                                             b                                                    e                                                 
  designed by a few especially for you but stay in the race with no end in place


       chorus

e           
  do you like to be close to the brink right on the edge
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  looking below with nowhere to go
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  and no way to find the rights for your mind


       chorus



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oldfolkie

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« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 04:12:36 PM »
nice work Steve - maybe I should post one of my songs on here. You have lots of rhymes in your lyrics Steve - do you find it makes the writing process harder to have a strict rhyme scheme? I find rhyming hard to do, but satisfying when it works.
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