[Piñata]

I don't bleed when I cut through
Why do you?
I can't sleep so I never do
Why do you?

I won't moan when I've gotta die
Who am I?
I won't shiver no I won't cry
Evil eye

I'm no dinner to a heartbeat
..........
So you better run and you better scream yeah
For your pain is a fine treat but I
I never wanted it to be eternal
I never wanted it to be eternal

I don't know a lot of kung-fu
Why do you?
I never learned so I never knew
Why do you?

I can't walk nevermind fly
Who am i?
I won't do it and i won't try
Evil eye

(Chorus) *Extended

(Instrumental Ending)

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hello people! have just joined here.... looking to improve my songwriting, and maybe exchange ideas with some other like minded peeps.. anyway, what I have here one of the first songs I got together with my band, Hide the Evidence to play, called Evil Eye... would appreciate any thoughts/feedback you might like to give.

Thankyou!
-Olly

[Dutchbeat]

Hi Pinata,

welcome to the forum. Great groove! Cool lyrics. Great start, if this, as you say, one of the first songs of your band. A shame the sound is deforming, but looking forward to hearing more

[RichyRowlatt]

Loving the groove, good structure, catchy, pretty good on the whole,

Richy

[Piñata]

Kind of noticed I fluffed up the lyrics that night... oh well, appreciate the comments anyway.

[nooms]

hi ollie
couldve kept that groove going all night, terrific
dont know what you were singing tho i see the lyrics now but the title and your passion
and the nice bite of the groove says it all..great stuff..
be nice to get a good fat studio recording but capturing the live thing..

well done guys and welcome to the forum..
get involved, reviews and comments,  some good people on here
and im sure the forum will open up for you..
good luck

[mihkay]

Cracking groove. Laid back power. A good combination.