Stand On US.

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Bingo Starr

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« on: November 03, 2012, 01:10:33 PM »
You don't have to wear a veil, your beauty is inside
 no matter what they say, you fill me with pride
 They come here take over, want to throw a blanket over
  but what counts is who we are they'll soon discover

  Stand on us, step on us tread us to the ground
  then go back to your cave then take a look around
  What do you have, no happiness no future
    those outside your existence could be the ones to teach you

  Ask yourselves why? You might rule by fear but not have respect
   simple rules of logic and co-operation you utterly reject
    Surely no God would insist on the restriction you adhere to
     the rules you make for others are not standards they are only demons within you
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« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2012, 12:56:25 AM »
It's good, but a bit short. Doesn't have much in it to define it as a song as opposed to a poem. I guess, though, if it's set to music eventually then it's a song.
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