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WhOoSh

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« on: October 31, 2012, 04:32:28 PM »


Here we go as promised, another little song  ;D
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« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2012, 04:47:15 PM »
I think you should stick these vids in the bar section..there not music and only push real songs down the `chart`...they are good for what they are..but,,,your having a laugh. ???

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« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2012, 08:40:07 PM »


your certainly out there on your own whoosh, using your sat nav on vocals..a pioneer ,
if you could find a melodic hook it might come to life.
because there is a story there, i think..
the voice goes wrong toward the end, you need to take more care..
its entirely hook free which is an achievment in itself i suppose..
i may not believe this tomorrow...

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« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2012, 09:27:42 PM »


your certainly out there on your own whoosh, using your sat nav on vocals..a pioneer ,
if you could find a melodic hook it might come to life.
because there is a story there, i think..
the voice goes wrong toward the end, you need to take more care..
its entirely hook free which is an achievment in itself i suppose..

That is brilliant .. sat nav , that is cool. it is actually text to speach because my voice is rather harsh.
I have a plan B but it it still being worked on.  ;D
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« Reply #4 on: November 01, 2012, 12:24:08 AM »
If your vocals arnt up to scratch how about working on an instrumental? To be honest, an instrumental would be prefered over a synthetic voice unless you are using something like vocaloid version 3, that sounds quite acceptable from the demos I have heard.


WhOoSh

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« Reply #5 on: November 01, 2012, 06:35:42 AM »
If your vocals arnt up to scratch how about working on an instrumental? To be honest, an instrumental would be prefered over a synthetic voice unless you are using something like vocaloid version 3, that sounds quite acceptable from the demos I have heard.


Good idea and thanks :)
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« Reply #6 on: November 01, 2012, 02:35:55 PM »
I think it's great Whoosh. I've heard nothing like it before and after a while the vocal's going to grate a bit but at the moment I'm just enjoying myself listening to it!  :D

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« Reply #7 on: November 01, 2012, 11:47:08 PM »
I think it's great Whoosh. I've heard nothing like it before and after a while the vocal's going to grate a bit but at the moment I'm just enjoying myself listening to it!  :D

Thanks I wrote it about the person I love most in all the world.  :)
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