[Peppermint]

Hey everyone,

A couple of months ago I wrote a song about a girl who was getting abused by her boyfriend,
Well this time I have decided to write a song about the boyfriend trying to apolagise.

Hope you like it. 

I’m Sorry

You always heard me say I’m sorry,
But you’ve heard it all before,
And I’m sorry I always let you down,
As you laid injured on the floor,

You always said you would love me,
And I was all you were waiting for,
So how could I have let you down,
By pushing you though that open door,

All my tears are full of sorrow,
And my heart is full of pain,
So please will you come back to me,
So we can start it all again,

Between you and all the booze,
I didn’t know which one to choose,
And due to our different views,
It couldn’t take away your bruise,

All my tears are full of sorrow,
And my heart is full of pain,
So please will you come back to me,
So we can start it all again,

[The Corsair]

It's just a fancy way of saying 'I'm sorry', which wouldn't really cut it if you were actually apologising to a girl you were beating. It needs something more heart-wrenching, he needs to be seen to be fighting with some serious demons. Make us feel sorry for him too. Make sure, though, you don't make it look like he's making excuses.

I know I've taken a while to respond to this, I just couldn't get my finger on what this was lacking IMO and now I feel like I've figured it out.