Hey!
I was on the train to Brussels yesterday and this popped up. I literally wrote it in 5mins, and there are several points I'm really uncertain about, but I wanted to check what you think.
I'd like to know if you think it's any good before I start working on the music.
Give me all your remarks, suggestions... And also let me know if you think it's rubbish :p
There's no bridge and/or chorus (yet), more of a only-verses story, Dylan-style (but obvsly a lot less genius :p)
Don’t throw me out
Not today
The weather’s bad
Streets are grey
Where do I roam
To find some food
A place to sleep
As if I could
I love this town
I always did
But on my own
It looks so sad
No one to pat me
On the back
To throw my stick
Cut me some slack
Out here now
I need a friend
A searching soul
Someone to mend
The tears I cry
In silent night
When I am scared
And lost the fight
Are you too
Looking for peace
A way to see
Through the trees
Then join me friend
And we’ll succeed
Victory for all
Beit bittersweet
Grts
SD