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S.T.C
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Re: Jumping bridges
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Reply #15 on:
October 29, 2012, 08:44:33 PM »
That's why I like writing to other people's lyrics and stc's are great!
Thanks F..the monies in the post..
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tina m
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Re: Jumping bridges
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October 29, 2012, 10:50:58 PM »
i cant understand why either of you wants to change this it sounds triffic in a real american singer songwriter way.....theyd just love this in the USA i reckon with your british accent flossie
ok i couldnt read the lyric but it sounded quite strong from what i heard
i dont know how you can produce songs like this flossie & not have a plane load of american music moguls abducting you to caifornia.....
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flossie
Platinum Album
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Re: Jumping bridges
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Reply #17 on:
October 29, 2012, 10:59:08 PM »
Ha ha, i'd like to be abducted tonight...! In the absence of the abduction I shall continue to plod on!
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gerrybhoy
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October 29, 2012, 11:56:06 PM »
Lovely, just lovely. Great vocal lots of expression, piano piece is also very nice, would like to hear how it develops.
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Michael
Solo Gig
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Re: Jumping bridges
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Reply #19 on:
October 30, 2012, 11:41:44 AM »
Absolutely beautiful !
Flossie I think your voice and the piano were made for each other, just a perfect combination !
STC, could you maybe post the lyrics? I always find it hard to pay attention to the words in a song while just listening to the music (especially when they're not in my native language).
Very much looking forward to see what you guys make out of this !!
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misswhiterabbit
Open Mic
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Re: Jumping bridges [ added lyrics]
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Reply #20 on:
October 30, 2012, 06:54:30 PM »
Vocals are really stunning, this song has a lot of potential. I can hear so many sounds coming in and out, can't wait to hear this developed.
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