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Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« on: October 25, 2012, 07:26:21 PM »
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zl2eFQ7UdZ0

Get down on the floor
Your begging for more
And it's time to go

Leave it to chance
You can't wait for a dance
Get on that floor

There playing your song
You've got to catch on
Youre on fire

Youre in love with that girl
Your feeling  so swell
And doing so well

Don't tell the world
They will all want a piece
Hold onto your girl

Rock - Rock - Rock

Kiss her all day
Love her all night

Now is the time to rock her
Out of sight
Now is the time to
Rock through the night.
« Last Edit: October 25, 2012, 07:30:11 PM by Little Bill »
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2012, 08:58:44 PM »
One of the strangest songs I heard today !!
Who is delivering the vocal? Sounds like a news reader...

Fairly short, not exactly a complete song I'd say...
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2012, 11:44:26 PM »
not sure what to make of this whoosh..seems to been built from bits of 'lets dance', with the lady from the post office on vocals ..look forward to the next instalment
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #3 on: October 26, 2012, 07:08:53 PM »
Thanks . Got more in store ;)
« Last Edit: October 26, 2012, 07:43:21 PM by WhOoSh »
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2012, 07:26:18 PM »
haha thats brilliant. not much more to say really. love it.
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2012, 08:03:18 PM »
Short and mad...hope theres not more. ;D
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2012, 09:36:20 PM »
I've gotta say that was not what I expected. Initially I thought I had the wrong link. Definitely a lot of energy in this short number. Where the vocals vocaloid? or some other synthetic voice? Weird effect and in some ways quite endearing as a one off. Instrumentation was good, obviously relying heavily on the beat and the riff base but well captured.
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2012, 09:40:08 PM »
Utter brilliance. Love it.
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 10:41:51 PM »
1 song per week is the way M likes it...you havent read the forum rules!
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #9 on: October 26, 2012, 10:49:41 PM »
 ;D ;D...this made me smile..so you get a big thumbs up from me mate.....No criticism or advice needed, it is what it is.   A fertile/creative imagination at work here I think ;D  Looking forward to hearing more.. Good work and a big Welcome ;D
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #10 on: October 26, 2012, 11:08:33 PM »
If this was an advert for a Camera or a Soft Drink inn the 1990's I would not be surprised.  ;)
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #11 on: October 27, 2012, 04:54:42 AM »
Big shout guys. I got tons of these  kinda songs knocking about. They just want to say.

" Hey ,  Is this love. Is this love ?"

They just built that way. Songs got needs you know  :D
« Last Edit: October 27, 2012, 05:01:09 AM by WhOoSh »
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #12 on: October 27, 2012, 10:00:41 AM »
Hi,

The first part reminds me of Union of the Snake by Duran Duran. The rest, including the video? Different. And that's not a bad thing.

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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #13 on: October 27, 2012, 12:05:54 PM »
welcome to thé forum, Whoosh,
cool and bizarre!

i would love to hear and see more!
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Re: Your Begging For More | Short song without a Chorus

« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2012, 01:55:24 PM »
Totally, utterly mad mad mad. It's original, interesting and full of ideas and short. Erm......I don't know what more to say.
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