Only just clocked your reply Binladeda. Trust me mine was also full of four letter words, anger and with a bit of proper shameless style pub riots thrown in for good measure!!!
I can't thank everyone enough for the time you've spent listening to my little offering and giving me your thoughts. I just want to make very clear before I post any more that I am categorically NOT a musician. I was an accomplished violinist when I was a kid but I absolutely hated it. I was in bands in the late 80's and most of the 90's with some success, but I am fundamentally a songwriter. I have a good ear for a melody and am pretty confident when it comes to lyrics and structure but I defer in terms of musicality to my eclectic bunch of close friends.
In the past I've thrown tens of thousands of pounds at various studios only to get back recordings that in my opinion do no more justice to the song than just me and the piano. I've found that pretty much any engineer I've worked with has had an impossible ego (one of my pet hates) and thinks they are much better than they actually are. I've always known my strengths and my weaknesses in equal measures
I've been dead impressed with the quality of recordings from all of you on here and the more stuff I'm listening to the more I'm thinking that I need to get off my lazy arse and learn how to record myself properly. I feel it's a bit unfair to name names, but James, Monty Jim, Tone, Michael, the sound quality of your stuff is incredible. That's not to take anything away from anyone else of course, what a talented bunch you all are.
So, to sum up, when I play the piano, I use my right hand only and the left just plods out the bass notes. The melody should offer up some of the rhythm, and I'm really interested to hear any direction you all think you would take this. If it's ok with all of you I will also try and include a link to the live recording so you can see where we've taken stuf. As an example, what I think I've decided to be my next post, when I wrote it I heard the Beegees, or even some boyband or other. I take it to the band and becomes a kind of White Stripes punk thing. I love it.
Back on my current post, the live version was only the second run through, so I may well post as we polish it up.
Tghanks for listening, sorry if I'm going on but Monday morning at work is the best place needs filling with something!!