That was awesome ANDY
There is some really intelligent and mature touches in there!
I loved the guitar parts - subtle enough to support the lyrics but "twiddly" enough for the genre
I especially liked the panned "call & answer" guitar parts
The production is also particularly sweet
Gotta love those machine gun kicks
I really enjoyed the changes throughout the track, which maintained interest without turning into a "widdle" fest on the guitar - I thought it was great
The only feedback I would give is that I think the vocals go do with a bit more "bite"
I can hear that the vocalist has got it in him - I get the feeling he just isn't "letting go"
A trick that may help is to ask him to re-record the vocal with the existing vocal playing through his headphones whilst recording. This may help him "compete" with the existing recording and help get the same amount of energy into the vocals as there is in the rest of the track
At no point are these comments related to their ages - this is top notch stuff for any age and is extremely professional sounding
Great job!