[Stroller2010]

Really can't decide whether I like this or not.


I see through you now
Behind the skin and the ego
All those crude jokes mean nothing
Pretending to be a passionate lover
I have another word for it
It's called arrogance

You've fallen for your own disguise
You remind yourself every day
To push it a little bit further
All the heartless things you said
Have come back to bite you
I see through you now

And what's that?
Right there
In the corner of your eye?
Is that a tear I see?
Let's celebrate now
You have a conscience

I know what you're thinking
This is not who I am
You say you want to change
Regenerate, transform
But will you in the end?
Of course not
You'll keep playing hide and seek
With your emotions
But you'll never find them
At least you say you won't
I'm sorry
It had to happen this way

It's unavoidable
Unexplainable
Unbelievable
I see through you now

[titiami]

this is good, will work well with a repetitive chorus though.

[Peppermint]

I Like it 

It flows quite well also.

[travis]

The hook is good and the lyric tells a good story of the  bitterness felt. Go with it, do a rewrite or two and see how it develops.
The best writing is usually in those rewrites.
Travis

[Sing4me88]

This lyric is really good. Gets right to the point and makes a very definite and identifiable point. Do agree with suggestions to maybe try and get a repetitive chorus worked in but on the whole the hook and lyrics are great.