Hi guys, I've been trying to decide whether to share this early or not, I want to insert a bridge at around the 2:24 mark I think. I started a thread on that and may have one worked out. I've got some stuff going on at home which may well develop into a bit of a nightmare so this may end up being 'it'. That said, I would like to tidy it up more and add that bridge if I get the chance. I'm breaching the 'one a week' rule slightly but this might be my last song post for a little while. I'll still do some reviewing Saturday if I can and I'll still be on here for other stuff like always
I've stuck it in the comps board as a demo cos I don't really consider it finished yet. Any ideas to improve it would be very welcome. If I do get time to re-visit it I can knuckle down and get it done quite quickly working with your suggestions
These chains
http://soundcloud.com/habitatsongs/these-chains-acoustic-1Left in the corner of nowhere
The rain beating down on my face
These chains that once
Completed me
That gave me such pride and such grace
Holding me coldly and lonesome now
My friend you'll surely turn round
These chains that once
Completed me
Now hold me firm
To the ground
Will it ever
Be the same
Will I ever
Hear you say my name
AgainNothing could ever prepare me
This loneliness hurting so bad
These chains that once
Completed me
So cold, so painful, so sad
I thought what we had was so special
A bond like nothing I've known
But these chains that
Once completed me
Now keep me here so alone
You were the one I respected
The love that I had in my heart
These chains that
Once completed me
Are now pulling all that apart
My friend you'll surely return though
And I will jump into your arms
These chains that
Once completed me
Will once again do me no harm