[Stroller2010]

Wrote this on a whim in the last half an hour, feedback appreciated.

I'm so stupid
Why did I let go so soon?
I never got to enjoy
Every little bit of you

It's like we never met
Why am I upset?
Before the first kiss
Did you ever exist?

I'm so stupid
Oh so stupid

So many years
It all felt too rushed
All those memories
Lost in the lust

It's like we never met
Why am I upset?
Before the first kiss
Did you ever exist?

It wasn't my intention
Putting you in isolation
Forgetting your creation
I miss all the lessons
That I should have learned
They will forever burn

All of the skills that I should have in life
I'll never have, when was the last I cried?
Being young wasn't my style
Back when I was juvenile

It's like we never met
Why am I upset?
Before the first kiss
Did you ever exist?

I'm so stupid
I'm so stupid
I'm so stupid
So stupid
So stupid

[Bingo Starr]

I story of regret Stroller, we've all been there lol. If it was mine I'd trim it down a little as you have more or less told the story before you get half way through.
Best of luck with it
BS

[titiami]

a good write, trimming it will make it lose its taste, leave it the way it is.

[melodybeals]

These lyrics are super clever. i like them a lot. Good job. im going to check out some of your other stuff for sure.

[Sing4me88]

Really like this one. The title is brilliant and the lyrics definitely paint a picture of a pretty stupid guy who knows he's messed up. I think a little trimming might work, removing a line or two nothing more more as that would upset the flow. What genre/style are you aiming for with this one?

One minor change could possibly be changing the 3rd line to 'I should've enjoyed' as I think this reflects the guys guilt more (just a personal opinion the existing line is good too so maybe if it isn't broken don't fix it!)

[Peppermint]

Agreed with the other post above very good lyrics well done stroller 
I agree with titiami and also don't think the lyrics need trimming either.

[The Corsair]

Good stuff. Lots of ways it can be read into I think. All up, quite a deep story. Also, I like how you haven't said everything outright, the listener has to theorize as to what the whole story is. It's good, makes the listener engage a lot more, get involved with the song.

[Placid]

Nice title. The rest is ok, would've loved a bridge with a twist.