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GOD's WAITING ROOM

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travis:
IN GOD'S WAITING ROOM.
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My doctor said, son you're playing Russian Roulette
cut down on your drinking and smoking them darn cigarettes
You've heard this all before, me singing the same 'ole tune
but you need to look on that bar as God's waiting room
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Down in God's waiting room they turn dollars into wine
that little lady in red helps unburden my mind
Like her so much I sometimes carry her off home
when the other lady I love forgets to answer her phone
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In God's waiting room, sometimes the future is uncertain
there's happy guys, rich guys,and those that are hurtin'
There's a great atmosphere but memberships in decline
just last week they buried two good buddies of mine
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So Doc, I think I'd better take your sound advice
and give the elbow to the things you called my vice
In case I die before becoming a changed man
I'll have one last drink while I still can
c
My doctor said, son you're playing Russian Roulette
cut down on your drinking and smoking them darn cigarettes
You've heard this all before, me singing the same 'ole tune
but you need to look on that bar as God's waiting room

Stroller2010:
It's hard hitting, gritty and interesting. Pretty good. It flows well and is a good rap compared to a couple of others I've seen. For me, it might be dipping a little into cliche, but its not that noticeable. So yeah, I like it.

travis:
Thanks for your comments.
Travis

titiami:
well i cant say i quite like it, but yeah its interesting.

travis:
Thanks you
Travis

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