×
Login
Remember me
Toggle navigation
Guest
Login
Register
Home
Login
Register
The Songwriter Forum - songwriting reviews, tips and chat
Songwriter Forum
Competitions
Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
« previous
next »
Print
Pages: [
1
]
Go Down
Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
12 Replies
2843 Views
0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.
seriousfun
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1681
Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
on:
September 30, 2012, 06:22:15 AM »
This was a very interesting project and the results so far have been sooo varied and of such a great quality. This is my humble entry.
http://soundcloud.com/allan-kilgour/copper-coated-heart
Logged
habiTat
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1455
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #1 on:
September 30, 2012, 07:55:39 AM »
Excellent work SF, a sort of bluesy, rock'n'roll, country rendition. I really like this. It's so strange knowing the words to a song you've never heard
I love the pauses, kept thinking my pc had froze haha, they really work to keep the attention of the listener.
Really really good, we've got some very talented people on this forum
Logged
'Broom-tailed Star'
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IICeNC4QJHM
www.facebook.com/habiTatsongs
habitatsongs.bandcamp.com/
andy5544
Platinum Album
Posts: 659
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #2 on:
September 30, 2012, 07:57:35 AM »
This is a real foot tapper , the line dancing country version
nice guitar in there , crazy how different they're all turning out .
wonder which one is how stc imagined it would be when he wrote the lyrics ?
great version matey .
Logged
I wanted to be a hippy....but my mum wouldn't let me !!
Beware the JudDeRMan when the moon grows FAT !!!!!!!!
Michael
Solo Gig
Posts: 345
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #3 on:
September 30, 2012, 09:29:39 AM »
Quote from: andy5544 on September 30, 2012, 07:57:35 AM
This is a real foot tapper
Yep, couldn't keep mine still
I absolutely love the energy in this, and the vocals performance is brilliant! Brings to mind the King of Rock'n'Roll himself.
Sounds very very professional to me, you really did some amazing work here!
Logged
My stuff on Soundcloud
Dutchbeat
Guest
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #4 on:
September 30, 2012, 12:32:43 PM »
wow, that is great work, i mean how these lyrics fit!!!!!
well done, seriousfun! haha, that break with that middle eight / chorus is brilliant!!!!
sounds like a winner to me, but i have to check out the others first
«
Last Edit: September 30, 2012, 12:35:02 PM by Dutchbeat
»
Logged
man of simple pleasures
Platinum Album
Posts: 974
power to the people
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #5 on:
September 30, 2012, 01:58:46 PM »
fifties rock n roll version! fantastic stuff!
Logged
fly away and find my peace of mind...
https://soundcloud.com/man-of-simple-pleasures/tracks
Paul
Platinum Album
Posts: 813
"There are moments of magic, of beautiful peace!"
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #6 on:
September 30, 2012, 05:31:35 PM »
Hi Seriousfun
Another excellent interpretation of the blueprint lyrics. I can hear shades of Elvis and The Beatles. This is a real foot tapper, it's melodic an well constructed throughout.
I'm sure there could have been a place for this on the 1964 Beatles album 'Beatles For Sale'. Excellent!
Well done!
Logged
James Nighthawk
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1857
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #7 on:
October 01, 2012, 01:52:28 AM »
Foot tapping rock n roll!
Love the guitar solo.
This works great with the blues sequence. The bass line takes it all in a different direction.
LOVE the harmony on Copper Coated heart. The counterpoints stand out beautifully
Mix wise we are very treble happy! Makes everything sounds very digital...
This would sound awesome with a full studio band production so I am looking past the production changes I would make. Lovely stuff here... It is gonna be hard to choose a Fav in the comp I can tell already!
Logged
www.facebook.com/jamesnighthawk
Twitter @JamesNighthawk
mihkay
Platinum Album
Posts: 688
Tune first....Lyrics long, long way second.
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #8 on:
October 01, 2012, 04:11:24 PM »
Amazing. You've managed to fit the oddly structured lyric into a reasonably traditional arrangement without them sounding forced to fit.
Excellently done man.
Logged
I have no authority or standing here, only opinions. :-)
nooms
Global Moderator
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1963
songwriter
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #9 on:
October 01, 2012, 10:11:55 PM »
SF
total bar band version, good time music with a great chorus
nicely sung & performed. neat changes, they work really well, doobies style
smiles all over it
can imagine a beaten up woody piano on it ?
well done
Logged
i may not believe this tomorrow...
https://soundcloud.com/nooms-1
S.T.C
Stadium Tour
Posts: 2633
American Cars........out now
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #10 on:
October 02, 2012, 01:05:02 PM »
Don`t they just fit this style ! did n`t see this coming..i also like the pauses..good work SF...
Logged
https://oldsongsnew.bandcamp.com/
http://www.oldsongsnew.com/
Kafla
Guest
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #11 on:
October 07, 2012, 09:47:56 AM »
Roy Orbison!
This is great Allan - great mix as well
I love the change into the chorus - sounds very Beatles esque
Excellent !
Logged
Binladeda
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1234
Re: Blueprint Entry - Seriousfun
«
Reply #12 on:
October 08, 2012, 08:23:26 AM »
Really good...very impressed with the way you constructed this with the lyrics you were given. Sounds like you've been playing it for years
..great vocals/harmonies, excellent guitar.......big 'pub' whistle/applaud/shouts for more....from me
Logged
Nowt as queer as folk...........my gran
Print
Pages: [
1
]
Go Up
« previous
next »