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« on: September 30, 2012, 06:22:15 AM »
This was a very interesting project and the results so far have been sooo varied and of such a great quality. This is my humble entry.


http://soundcloud.com/allan-kilgour/copper-coated-heart

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« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2012, 07:55:39 AM »
Excellent work SF, a sort of bluesy, rock'n'roll, country rendition. I really like this. It's so strange knowing the words to a song you've never heard  :-\

I love the pauses, kept thinking my pc had froze haha, they really work to keep the attention of the listener.

Really really good, we've got some very talented people on this forum  ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #2 on: September 30, 2012, 07:57:35 AM »
This is a real foot tapper , the line dancing country version  :D

nice guitar in there , crazy how different they're all turning out .

wonder which one is how stc imagined it would be when he wrote the lyrics ?

great version matey .  ;)
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« Reply #3 on: September 30, 2012, 09:29:39 AM »
This is a real foot tapper
Yep, couldn't keep mine still  ;D

I absolutely love the energy in this, and the vocals performance is brilliant! Brings to mind the King of Rock'n'Roll himself.
Sounds very very professional to me, you really did some amazing work here!

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« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2012, 12:32:43 PM »
wow, that is great work, i mean how these lyrics fit!!!!!

well done, seriousfun! haha, that break with that middle eight / chorus is brilliant!!!!

sounds like a winner to me, but i have to check out the others first
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« Reply #5 on: September 30, 2012, 01:58:46 PM »
fifties rock n roll version! fantastic stuff!
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« Reply #6 on: September 30, 2012, 05:31:35 PM »
Hi Seriousfun

Another excellent interpretation of the blueprint lyrics.  I can hear shades of Elvis and The Beatles.  This is a real foot tapper, it's melodic an well constructed throughout.

I'm sure there could have been a place for this on the 1964 Beatles album 'Beatles For Sale'.  Excellent!

Well done!

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« Reply #7 on: October 01, 2012, 01:52:28 AM »
Foot tapping rock n roll!

Love the guitar solo.

This works great with the blues sequence. The bass line takes it all in a different direction.

LOVE the harmony on Copper Coated heart. The counterpoints stand out beautifully

Mix wise we are very treble happy! Makes everything sounds very digital...

This would sound awesome with a full studio band production so I am looking past the production changes I would make. Lovely stuff here... It is gonna be hard to choose a Fav in the comp I can tell already!
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« Reply #8 on: October 01, 2012, 04:11:24 PM »
Amazing. You've managed to fit the oddly structured lyric into a reasonably traditional arrangement without them sounding forced to fit.  :o ;D

Excellently done man.
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« Reply #9 on: October 01, 2012, 10:11:55 PM »

SF
total bar band version, good time music with a great chorus
nicely sung & performed.  neat changes, they work really well, doobies style
smiles all over it
can imagine a beaten up woody piano on it ?
well done
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« Reply #10 on: October 02, 2012, 01:05:02 PM »
Don`t they just fit this style ! did n`t see this coming..i also like the pauses..good work SF... ;)


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« Reply #11 on: October 07, 2012, 09:47:56 AM »
Roy Orbison!

This is great  Allan - great mix as well

I love the change into the chorus - sounds very Beatles esque

Excellent !

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« Reply #12 on: October 08, 2012, 08:23:26 AM »
Really good...very impressed with the way you constructed this with the lyrics you were given.  Sounds like you've been playing it for years ;D..great vocals/harmonies, excellent guitar.......big 'pub' whistle/applaud/shouts for more....from me  ;D ;D
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