[travis]

Kickin' the Butt off 'Ole Santa Claus

v
Things can really get under your skin
marriage breakin' up, some guy moves in
Lawyers dictate when I can see MY boys
Christmas Eve,want to take them their toys

v
Knock on my old door then after a pause
who comes to the door old Santa Claus
Standin' there with toys in his hand
all for my boys, asleep in dream land

c
Don't need trouble from the law
but I sure will if I persist
Kickin' the butt off ole Santa Claus
sits at the top of my Christmas list - OR MAYBE  Sit at the top of my buttkick list?

v
Hated Santa for takin' hold of my life
down the chimney with my kids and wife
With each beer, there's a questionin' tear
do I go back,or kick his butt next year?
c
Don't need trouble from the law
but I sure will if I persist
Kickin' the butt off ole Santa Claus
sits at the top of my Christmas list

B
Thought well, it's Christmas! Then just got angry inside
Santa and his Mary Christmas took this guy for a sleigh ride!
I'll be out in the cold while they're sharing a Christmas lunch
Have me more rum,then Santa gets Christmas Punched
(Spoken maybe?)
c
Don't need trouble from the law
but I sure will if I persist
Kickin' the butt off ole Santa Claus
sits at the top of my Christmas list

[titiami]

Its well written, not a subject thats been done before which makes it origional and exceptional. I enjoyed reading it.

[travis]

Pleased you like it. I have added an alternative last line to the C
Travis

[The Corsair]

To be honest I absolutely hate it, but that's because I find the use of the word 'butt' to mean bum/arse cringeable and to me it makes the whole song sound clumsy.

[travis]

Thank you for  your comments.
Travis