[bewarethisboy]

I think this great. BTB

[seriousfun]

A thouroughly enjoyasble song. Lyrics are great in my book, I enjoyed them so I guess folks all look for different things from words. The vocal delivery was very well done and musically I loved it. On the production side yes it was alittle muddy and I found the strings sounding to constant. They needed to breathe a bit more. You could play with automated volume a little and maybe modulation to get a little more realism in them. Apart from that I thought this was a truly outstanding song.

Kudos to you.

[Schavuitje]

This sounds great! Well done with this firstly. 
I loved those drums and how it all rolled along.
I thought the lyrics were good at first but then when it got to the climbing over mountains and touching the sky, growing like a flower it all became too much.
The 'I Will's' really irked for some reason.
Again this is probably down to personal taste so I wouldn't worry too much about it.
Your vocals are great on this btw Kaf, I'm loving all this power you are giving to your vocals. 

[habiTat]

I really like this guys, well done The vocal is excellent, esp. the way you sing 'mountains' AWESOME.

Crackin' writing Steve, really, really good.

I also really like the arrangement, the quieter piano bit in the middle, very well placed..

You say it's not finished, but as a fresh set of ears, I'd say it's perfect.

[man of simple pleasures]

another great vocal delivery kinda makes the song for me along with good lyrics like!