Alright/Tonight

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« on: September 27, 2012, 02:28:13 PM »
Hello all,

A song about love, but moreover about loss.  Feedback as always is appreciated.

Alright/Tonight

1
In the deepest dark of winter
When the nights were drawing near
Could this be that special feeling
For the first time of the year
A subtle glance and a soulful whisper
Says everything’s gonna be alright
I slowly start to get your meaning
We’re gonna come together

2
You took me to the places you go
Showed me all the things you got
You introduced me to all your friends
I admit they sure have a lot
But what I ain’t got ain’t worth having
And what I have I know is mine
And I got a real good feeling
We’re gonna come together

3
We opened up to one another
‘Til we left nothing unknown
We walked barefoot through the rain and cold
And I carried you on home
And there we shared our warmth together
It all just seemed to feel so right
It’s one of those fundamental feelings
We’re gonna come together

Chorus
So many people bring you down
They don’t know you like I know now
But we’re gonna show them
Yeah girl, we’re gonna do alright
And this winter can last forever
We’ll come together tonight

Middle 8
(Oh no you’re trying too hard
Let’s try to come together)
(Oh no we’re going too fast
Let’s try to come together)
(Oh no you’re going too far
Let’s try to come together)...

4
In the bitter chill of morning
I looked into your waking eyes
We spoke without purpose or meaning
Before I gave you my goodbyes
I sleep-walked through the rest of the day
Only you running through my mind
And then I phoned you the next evening
For us to get together

5
I spoke, but knew you were not listening
And I knew something was wrong
You said that you to do some thinking
I asked you what was going on
You told me you needed to be alone
You said that you needed some time
And then that time become forever
We couldn’t be together

2nd Chorus
So many people bring you down
And I can see what they say now
Girl you got a problem
Yeah girl, we could’ve been alright
You're only wanting when you're hurting
And now we’re nothing tonight

titiami

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« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2012, 03:53:24 PM »
well this is good, as i was reading the song lyrics the melody sounded in my head but too bad I'm just a lyricist. good