[Stroller2010]

Hi people. Wrote this when I realised I haven't written in a while - I suppose that's what starting A Levels does to you. But I found this a nice relief.


I'm so bored of love
I'm so bored of warmth
My time to burn has gone
I have lost all strength

I have now escaped
To a place of emotions
I still have my bruises
The edge of all creation

Never touched by time
My companion only ice
No more marble eyes
No more perfect lies

A place that I call pure
No social disease
I will not speak
A paradise of ease

There is no more hell
No one left to hate
I will not judge
I can't make a mistake

Buried in the snow
Only ice to hold
I am all alone
I've never been so cold

Never touched by time
My companion only ice
No more marble eyes
No more perfect lies

There is no control
Now I cannot fall
I can see for miles
Silence is my home

I have no one to blame
I won't play Satan's game
A place of no revenge
Nothing will ever change

I have no more needs
Guarded by the sun
This is freedom

[The Corsair]

It seems like the sort of song that hits a lot of cliche-ish stuff, but would get away with it because of the theme of it. It would depend on the delivery though. The new Muse single (Madness) is a good example of getting away with slightly cliched stuff through style of delivery.

[titiami]

its not bad, but to me it feels dull, sad and too emotional. nobody likes lonely.

[The Corsair]

nobody likes lonely.

I disagree, lonely is a great guy and one of my closest friends

Seriously though, I do disagree with you there. People feel lonely sometimes and there's nothing wrong with that, nor is there anything wrong with a song that reflects that sentiment.

[titiami]

Well that was me being too sentimental, i hate lonely, it just locks me in a cage.        Sorry stoller2010, i like most of your lyrics, these are good but like i said lonely puts me in a cage.