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S.T.C

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« on: September 24, 2012, 11:42:32 AM »
Just wrote this,,,i`ve not spent ages on it,,not agonized over it,,,,sort of Nine inch Nails,,type of lyric

If anyone wants to make a tune out of this,,,,you can!

cold roads
alleys dark and lost
life just ain`t a life
until you count the cost

i`ve fallen off the rails
i`m lying on my back
i get the funniest feeling
just before  the knot

just before the drop...

and it feels like a drug to me
yeah, it feels like a drug to me
and  it`s  not my apathy
that leaves me wanting more
still time to make a score

a window full of screaming rain
an arm full of, a rising pain
never dull the sense again
that tells me...i must quit

its a way to go i guess
isn`t it,,,,,,isn`t it....

stop me before i digress
leave me in this open mess
of solitude..its like a food you see..

and it feels like a drug to me
yeah, it feels like a drug to me
and  it`s  not my apathy
that leaves me wanting more
still time to make a score........

i slip out ,i slip in
out of conciousness
i look within....

i begin to rolls my eyes
and then i realise

it feels like a drug to me
yeah , feels like a drug to me...


a window full of screaming rain
an arm full of, a rising pain
never dull the sense again
that tells me...i must quit


i`ve fallen off the rails
i`m lying on my back
i get the funniest feeling
just before  the knot

just before the drop...

and it feels like a drug to me..
yeah,feels like a drug to me..

but it`s a way to go
isn`t it.....isn`t it..


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« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2012, 04:08:16 PM »
Hiya,

I love your lyrics and I'd really like to do another collab can you structure your next lyric like this for me if you would be up for it!

I need a 3 verses a chorus and a middle eight?

How bout it?

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« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2012, 04:23:02 PM »
She shoots ,she scores!

Well.if your back in the land of the living....i have another set of lyrics you can look at..will email

Not this though,,its too depressing  ;)

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« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 12:03:16 PM »
Depressing or no, good stuff I'd say. Blunt and pained, slightly graphic, but all up not excessive.
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« Reply #4 on: September 28, 2012, 03:56:16 PM »
the lyrics are good but lets wait to hear what Flossie will make them sound.